Monday, October 23, 2017

Bewitched

And now for something a little different . . . 

     
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  Pumpkins

They deceive us.  And we them.
Carving our kids’ whims into
their plump & gusty flesh,

handfuls of scooped seeds
mounding the newspaper-strewn
floor, bent to the scarred oilcloth

saved from the year before,
we huddle in the circle of their
scent — acrid & still blades

tracing grins already inked into
their bland & swollen skins
that we might alter, always, if

we dare — slight frenzy, grimace,
calm — by one swift slice or angle
of the wrist.  Our kids, all goggle-

eyed, watch on.  And on we carve,
refining lines — the razor’s edge
of their gapped teeth — not

quitting where we might, now
hardly conscious that we carve
for them . . . .  Finished now.   
  
They stare, queer, droll, triangle-
eyed, crescent mouths agape.
Our kids squeal with delight.  

Days beyond festivities, the
neighborhood grown calm 
again in chill fall’s leafless time,

they lean from the porch ledge,
dull orange, spent, features
caving in & turning pulpWe 

watch them now the most,
& feel them kin.  Their smiles
as they rot, become more real.

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Dan Stryk's X-ray







"Pumpkins" first appeared in The Southern Humanities Review
and later in Dan’s first full-length volume of poems,The Artist 
and the Crow (Purdue University Press). This revised 
version will be appearing in Back to the Source: Selected 
Poems & Parables [San Francisco Bay Press, 2018]

3 comments:

  1. I was beginning to think it a fine poem celebrating Halloween traditions when it made that plunge into very deep stuff. Haunting last images. Well done, and very moving!
    --Don Croydon

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  2. We must remember the delight and not dwell on the inevitable end of all flesh.

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  3. Fascinating meditation! The poem brilliantly balances the joys and the mysteries in our lives. As a father myself, and a musician, I really relate to the line "hardly conscious we carve for them . . . ."

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